Some of the most superb feelings
and tingling emotions come from
what love an Angel, such as yourself,
and I make.
Our world, as we have
come to see it, has no bearing and an
infinite boundary when we are
locked lips to lips.
No one person can
sever that bond of nothing but pure
affection and intimate passion.
We are the Angels of Our Heaven and
with merely our names to live with.
A name, which consists of nothing
more than symbols of a language
taken for granted.
I would soon
rather speak nothing. A true test of
love of which we have accomplished
merely by the elucidation in our
eyes.
Earth moves with such apathy that
only Our Heaven can keep the pace
of our devotion for one another. As
slow as the heart beat of a Goliath at
rest.
Why would the world seem so
passive? I believe it is a chance for us
to make our own time to spend
together. It is love. It is what binds
the thoughts of all beings trying to
understand it.
It appears that you
and I have fallen into love, without
having looked for it. This is Heaven
and we are the Angels of Our
Heaven....
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You should remember to capitalize the first letter of each line and not just the first letter of each stanza. I liked the mood of the poem and I liked its message.